小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.Her name is Li Zhou.she is a very tidy and beautiful girl.She loves her family very much. She loves animal,like cut, dog and pig,Last week she picked up a little cut in the load.She loves it very much,she took care of it like she is her mum