错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;作者词汇量积累不错,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,有个别拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr. Wang: I am very sorry to tell you something, which might make you feel uncomfortable. Undergoing the cautious consideration, I decide to resign the position you offerd me just two months ago. At first, enthusiasm for literature drived me to applied for the job, but I gradually find that the aditor as a magazine which take "fashion" as topic is just catering for popular things. There are a cognitive difference between I expect. If I go on like this, I will lose my passion completely. Moreover, owing to this view, I konw I'm getting imcompetent to the work. Once again express my aplogies. Yours, Li Ming