作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Dear Mr. Wang: I am very overwhelmed to tell you something, which might make you feel uncomfortable. Undergoing the carefully consideration, I decide to resign the position you offered me just two months ago. At first, enthusiasm for literature driven me to applied for the job, but I gradually find that the editor as a magazine which takes "fashion" as topic is just catering for popular things. There is a cognitive difference between I expect. Provided that I go on like this, I will lose my passion completely. Moreover, owing to this view, I know I'm getting incompetent to the work. Once again express my aplogizes. Yours, Li Ming