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2005年考研英语作文真题:A letter to your Mr.Wan

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:55浏览次数:1800
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题目 A letter to your Mr. Wan
说明 Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.
要求
1.Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang
2.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
3.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
字数:100满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mr. Wang: I am very overwhelmed to tell you something, which might make you feel uncomfortable. Undergoing the carefully consideration, I decide to resign the position you offered me just two months ago. At first, enthusiasm for literature driven me to applied for the job, but I gradually find that the editor as a magazine which takes "fashion" as topic is just catering for popular things. There is a cognitive difference between I expect. Provided that I go on like this, I will lose my passion completely. Moreover, owing to this view, I know I'm getting incompetent to the work. Once again express my aplogizes. Yours, Li Ming

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