2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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The picture describles that four brothers and sister are playing a soccer game, but the "football" turns out to be their old father. Whether sons or daughter, none of them hope the father-ball roll into their net behind. We can notice that the old father excudes an expression of desperation and helplessness. What social phenonmon does this cartoon reflects? I think that it is provision for aged. In traditional thought of China culture, a person can lead to a rich old age with raising many childern, because he can get more return from his adult offsprings. However, this is not the case in reality. How to regard this responsibility for adult offsprings should raise elderly in return? Obviously, neither morally nor legally, it shouldn't be avoided.