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My idea of becaming a teacher my mother is a teacher,and i am proude of her,when i was a child,i have a dream of being a teacher.I want to become a teacher,the reasions are as follows. firstly,teacher is the greast profession in the world,they teach students knowledge without high salary. secnndly,it is students that teachers face to everyday,the working environment is simple.last but not least,I like students,i play with students as if i was a child,and i think it is suitble for me to become a teacher. If I became a teacher,I would spare no effort to help students learning more knowledge.