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1993年专四作文真题范文:My Idea of Becoming a Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 00:43浏览次数:1442
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观点阐述性作文,提出2-3个观点(对未来成为教师的认识或憧憬)写作方法可以是例证式(教师的崇高)也可以是因果式(教师的作用)。
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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My idea of becaming a teacher my mother is a teacher,and i am proude of her,when i was a child,i have a dream of being a teacher.I want to become a teacher,the reasions are as follows. firstly,teacher is the greast profession in the world,they teach students knowledge without high salary. secnndly,it is students that teachers face to everyday,the working environment is simple.last but not least,I like students,i play with students as if i was a child,and i think it is suitble for me to become a teacher. If I became a teacher,I would spare no effort to help students learning more knowledge.

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