教育部——the Ministry of Education
可增加从句的使用量,注意个别的句子错误;高级词汇稍微偏少,单词拼写方面也要继续努力;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
a national student sports program was hled on 29th of April,it began at 10-11am,in 2007. 110 million students paticipated the activity, who are from sennir high school,primary school and high school in jiangsu province. the ministry of education suggest that atudents should pracetice one hour every day,work healthy ,live happily, It is necessary for students in grade 3 in senier high school to do sports every day.sports is not only help them train their body,but also reduce their pressure of studing.