2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构不严谨。

Online Shopping 　　　Online Shopping have been a fashion. Lots of people shopping online .They stay in the room and buy lots of thing. 　　　Online Shopping have lots of good things .You needn’t walk much road then get tired and carry lots of things come back home .You needn’t get lots of money it easy to throw And you can buy it in the cheapest price. 　　　But online shopping also has lots of bad things. You can’t see the kind. So you can buy the wrong size. You could buy what you don’t like and you can buy the imitation thing. 　　　So I think you can buy some cheaper thing online and some expensive things you can buy it in reality. And you can see the store’s reputation. I think online shopping have good thing and also have bad thing so you must online shopping carefully.