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2001年考研英语作文真题:希望工程

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:40浏览次数:2178
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  Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to
  1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,
  2) give a specific example, and
  3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love. 
  You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
 本文中的图画非常简单,结合提示考生很容易理解其含义,但这张图片的意义却很深远:油灯上面的火焰是一个孩子的微笑,在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒,上面还有一句提示语“爱心是一盏灯,在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”这句话的理解关系到对整篇文章中心思想的正确理解。这句话的前半句是个比喻,后半句是一个越……越……的结构,考生应该深刻领会爱心的重要作用。本文中的提纲有三点,一是写出对于图画象征意义的理解,二是举出一个具体的事例,三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。另外这道题目中增加了情景语言,即:包括情景说明,提纲说明,以及图画。降低了题目的难度,考生可以结合提纲式作文、规定情景作文和图画作文的写作特点完成本文的写作。但要注意一个重要原则:英语情景说明语句,不可直接照搬,需要进行改动。尽量应用同义,近义词,相关表达,不同句式改造。例如worthy 可以替换为valuable,feelings 可以替换为 emotions,mankind 可以替换为 human being,noblest可以替换为greatest等。我们可分三段来完成本文。在第一段中不仅应描述图画,还应描述上面的那句话。在第二段中,应举一个能与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。这样的事例很多,考生可以结合自己的经历列举,如希望工程、抗洪捐款等等,也可以列举具体人物。最后一段中,考生可以提出自己的建议,这一部分难度不高,考生可以套用一些模版句型。
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There is a far-reached meaning indicated in this simple picture,which describes a flaming oil lamp lightening the dark space. There are some words saying that love likes lightening lamp, the more darkness, the more lightness. Clearly, the flame involved with a sweet smile directly shows the symbolic meaning as the pure love that has an unbelievable power to drive darkness. love is a traditional virtue deriving from the birth of our country , accordingly, there are tremendous example on 10 love such as the "Wang Lao Ji " company donated more than 10 billion yuan to give a hand to those people involving in the 8.0 degree earthquake breaking out in SiChuan province. It was the company's contribution leaded everyone as a Chinese to donate our little love and help during the catastrophe. There a number of people believe that they dont have the ability to show love and help others, for without enough money. In fact, love has no direct relationship with money. Sometimes, heartening words can disperse the upset feeling but money cannot. The real love origins from your heart, so it is advisable to show love in your heartfelt words, timely hands and sweet smiles.

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