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作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；句式变化多样。
It is doubtless that we are undermining our surrounding environment in the process of develop economy or science at the past several decades.At this point, whether we should shoulder the responsibilities to preserve them and take effective measures to improve the imperfect situation is a controversial one.In my view,something must be done to improve the polluted air ,dirty water ,degenerated soil,because it is not just to create a better living conditions for ourselves,but also for the benefit of our next generation. Firstly,it is obvious that government as the most important role in society should shoulder relatively responsibilities in the process to improve contaminated environment.The authority should enact law or policies and take serious measures to punish the individuals who violate it.Furthermore,more preventive measures which include invest humongous of funds and money in that field to protect the surrounding area being polluted. On other hand,every citizens also should care more about our global as well pay more attention to defend our "mother"from damage.For example,people is able to use basket to substitute plastic bags or utilize more transit mass rather private cars in their daily life.All in all,every little action involve in protect environment will contribute great influence. Although,it is not denied that enormous damage has been lead,it is not mean that we should give up utterly and take little things to do anything.Something is better than nothing for the of preserving environment. To sum up,i personally believe that we,human race,should make every endeavor to protect our reliable environment.Only by doing this can we ensure that we handle this green global to our next generation and next generation forever.
