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Dear classmates, Here we warmly welcome Miss Wilkinson. We feel very much honoured that we'll be taught by her. Miss Wilkinson is a middle school teacher of the United states. Five years ago she graduated from a university of Illinois,where she was born. Then she began to work as a teacher. Now she is already an excellent teacher with rich teaching experience. This year, she is invited to our school to teach us English for a year. We'll make good use of this chance and learn English even harder. We are sure that we'll make great progress in English especially in spoken English. Wish Miss Wilkinson a happy life here! Now let's invite Miss Wilkinson to give us a speech.