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新东方托福高分作文:对家长和孩子来说游戏都同等重要吗?

发布时间:2013-08-06 17:06浏览次数:889
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【题目要求

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

【题目分析

同意这个观点比较容易写。成年人也有娱乐的需求,从繁重的压力中解脱出来(escape),游戏对老年人更是如此。从游戏中可以学到很多东西(桥牌——团队精神;围棋、象棋——拓展智力)
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Games are fun and it is true for adults and children alike. It exerts the same important influence on grown-ups and children as well. My tandpoint is supported by the following reasons. To start with, games serve as a type of flavoring for their lives to relaxe. In China, the priority thing for children is studying due to the score-oriented education system. For adults? It is working that occuppies most of their time. As a result, both suffer a lot from the pressure of studying or working. It is said that 230 adults and children in total die from unbearable stress every year, according to National Statistics Report 2016. The dreadful figure implies that people badly need a way to deal with pressure and release themselves. Therefore, games can be used as a way to entertain themselves. Besides, games can improve body coordination both for adults and children. Take dance machine as example, if you want get score in the game, you have to listen to the rhythm of a song while your foot should step on right direction icon in accordance with what you have heard. I often play dance machine, so I excel in activities relating foot-eye coordination. In addition, games can provide a significant platform for adults and children to socialize with others since human beings are social animals. It is undeniable that our social interaction is very necessary. When we were children, we always want to play with others and didn’t want to be left alone. As an adult, we, driven by survival impetus, intend to make friends with others. Many games involve cooperation, in which children and adults can socially interact with others and they are plausible to become friends. All in all, games play the same crucial role amony both adults and children.

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