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雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:12浏览次数:1908
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雅思写作主题:城市交通问题,字数在300字以内。
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文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章层次较为清晰。

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 In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate.In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.The progress of transport industry is inevitable and undeniable. What is under controversy is whether the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate.To be frank, I am in high favor that we are well aware of the traffic problem.  In my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that we lack the infrastructure construction. Also the overpopulation is the cause of this problem, especially in China. Although the growth of the transport is rapid, it still can not meet the increasing needs of people. Furthermore, people abuse the private cars to take public transport instead, which caused more cars put into use.Lastly, individuals are also responsible for this problem. People are lacking in consciousness and awareness for traffic situation in order.Sometimes, people drive after drinking, which causes more traffic accidents.  The solution, I think, is for government to inject more funds into the construction of infrastructure, increase more construction, such as the restructuring of metro system, elevated ways, Pearl line, and superhighway. Also government should levy heavy tax on luxurious products, and encourage people to use bus service instead of private cars. To individuals, we may establish the family planning to control the growth of the population. Furthermore, we should publicize the importance of obeying the traffic regulations among people by education, and form the civil health lifestyle.  To conclude, with the joint effort of people and governments,I am sure the traffic problems will be improved.

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