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2015年高考作文优秀范文:登山活动

发布时间:2015-09-30 16:35浏览次数:2379
要求:
  星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
  1. 时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
  2. 活动的过程;
  3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
  注意: 1. 词数120左右。
  2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Every parent wants their kids to be the talents, so that the kids are meant to be the successful people. The talented children are smarter than the ordinary kids. They learn things very fast and skip grade to learn more. Some even go to university at the very early age. It has both good and bad sides. On the one hand, as these talented students are no longer satisfied with what they learn in their grade, it is good for them to receive higher education, so as to improve themselves. People are inspired to learn as much as possible, which makes them smart and knowledgeable. The talented kids should not waste their advantages.

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