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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
From ancient age to modern civilization, human race created numerous miracles in science, agriculture, medical care and other fields. Therefore, we are confident that the human race has infinite possibilities to move their civilization forward continuously. After hundreds of years, the development progress is slowing down not due to we stop our path, the subjects we conducted all are much more difficult than before and some of them might spend centuries of time realize breakthrough. Actually, People should know that the most of the new researches and developments undertaken are based on the previous successful results and rely on the machines, tools or some items we created or innovated. Thus, to explore the secret of human race development we should have clearly understanding of what areas of progress has been made. Generally, people are making efforts to build more comfortable, convenient and modern living environment. In light with these objectives, the inventors created diversified transportations to accelerate the social development. By aircraft and cruise ship, we can easily cross trough the continents and oceans in hours. By vehicles, we can go anywhere we want if there is a road. However people are not satisfied by only physical travelling but one day their voice and mind can spread worldwide. Then the telecommunication technology is advent to our life. With the escalation of computer, internet and mobile technology, people can communicate to someone else in distance in real time and enable to share their words, audios and videos with others. Meanwhile, our living conditions keep being optimized day by day. After years of urbanization, with the developments of material science, architecture and other relevant disciplines, we’re upgrading our public infrastructures as sanitation, libraries, stadiums, hospitals and son on towards perfect. All these progresses lead people’s life to a more effective and efficient way. We can live longer and healthier than decades before, thus we have much more time to learn and to explore the world. The researching subjects have already not constrained within the earth and nature exists. Now, People are ready to find the answers of philosophic questions they quested hundreds years before: who are we, where we came from and where are we going. To probe the genesis of life, we created spacecrafts to launch us to the universe. To detect the mystery of eternity, we developed genetic science to know the relevant between us and other species. To break through the limitation of human body, we invented sorts of robots to work under extreme conditions instead of us. To summarize, after centuries ongoing development human race never stop their progressing path. Don’t be doubtful, they must enable to create a glorious future.
