2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；熟练使用了一些长难句；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

As the saying goes:keep on and we will successful.As we all know ,all the famous people in the world would not successed without a stong will. Only keep on doing anything and have a strong will will we can make a great achievement then arrive the top mountain.It is a good sample like Einstain,even though he was failure in a ton of experiments,but after his effort,he was successed inventing light bulb,it is a great invention for our people even the world.If Einstain didn't continue to research,maybe the world will be put back a few years later to meet the light. So we should know that only these people who have a strong emotion will make a great different for our socil.Connected to our young,and we should have a strong will to do anything,anyone should be know that we will not see the rainbow without experienced wind and rain.