熟练使用了一些长难句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达较丰富,学术词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the devoloping of the Internet,more and more are fond of doing something with Intrtnet,Many years ago,we could communicate with our family by writing letter,but now,almost 60% people in China may use QQ or MSN to say hello with their family everyday. Because of Internet,it is impossible for us to write letter,and except this,there some other things are changing.When was young,My mother would take me to spend several days visiting My grandmother and aunt,But now,We needn't do this,we can always meet each other on Internat,it's so convienent for us.Though Internet have impacted us so much,it have another face.On Internet,we can do anything we want,so many people who go shopping and buy food on Internet at hoom,they needn't leave their bed.long times later,they could not to communicate with other people. Internet is a good invention for modern social at that time ,but we should use it in a right way.In a word,Internet is very important for us to communicate with others.
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