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2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7198
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Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

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报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

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第四段:结尾

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The causesa and solutions of the decreasing quality of life in large cities Nowadays, more and more people want to go to the top cities in China, such as: Shangh ai, Beijing, Guangzhou. In contray, the quality od life in large city is decreasing. So, why this phenonmen occured and how to solve it? Here are some reasons and solutions: First of all, the pollution in large cities is serious. There are a lot of manufactories, so they will let a great amount of polluted water out. Also, they will face a austere health problem because of the serious pollution. The large cities contain a large number of talents, so many of they will face serious stress on work. There are also some solutions: First, we should develop environmental protection technology and pay more attention to large cities' virescence. Second, we should set up the consciousness of health and build more and more sport equipment. Last but not least, they have to learn how to express stress. They can express stress through sports, music, movies and whatever they like. So, I think throgh our effort, the quality of life in large cities will increase again.

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