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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6007
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用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
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My name is Tanyin.Glad to introduce my family to you. My family has me, my mother, my father and my brother.I am 15 years old, and my younger brother is ten years younger than me.He can be very cute sometimes, and sometimes naughty makes people angry. My mom's career was a teacher.She teach me how to get along with others well.It is important for me to make friends.My dad was an engineer.He's very careful.But he was so busy that he didn't have time to take care of me and my brother.When my parents were busy, i always took care of my brother.My brother loved to play games with me too. I have a very good family.We got along so well.

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