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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4562
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the developing of the Internet,more and more people are fond of doing something with Intrtnet,several years ago,we could communicate with our family by writing letters,but now,almost 60% people in China may use QQ or MSN to say hello with their family every day. Because of Internet,it is impossible for us to write letter,and except this,there some other things are changing.When I was young,My mother would take me to spend several days visiting My grandmother and aunt,But now,We needn't do this,we can always meet each other on Internat,it's so convenient for us.Though Internet have impacted us so much,it has another face.On the Internet,we can do anything we want,so many people who go shopping and buy food on Internet at home,they needn't leave their bed.long times later,they could not communicate with other people. In short,Internet is a good invention for modern social at that time,but we should use it in a right way.In a word,Internet is extremely important for us to communicate with others.

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