2008年12月英语四级作文真题:一次性塑料袋

衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；采用了一些简单的从句；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

At present,more and more people owing private car by the incressing ecomony.when we are go shopping seem the private car are full of road,result in the people slow creep and people think the private car are very many.But int the china everyone dream of owing private auto and become the popular trend. The private car alse many of environment and social probiems.Firstly,more and more private car it emits gas insult in air and water pollute. Secondly,when private car going to roal also bring the tratific problems.At the rosh hour the auto remove just as creep. The last but most importation,the private car bring the emergy crisic,it is commom think the oil nature resource is limited. In my own eyes,as a colleges and universities students should are reduce use private car take place of by bus.When we are trip need car may be gether reduce use private car. At lase,reduce use private car bring greed-environment and fresh air.