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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨。
Student Use of Computers From the line chart can we see the change obviously in recent years, that is , an increasing number of university students use computers for their career. Nowadays computers become more and more popular . There are three reasons to explain this social phenomenon. Firstly, it is due to its convenience and practicability for people's life and study. Secondly, the development trend of computers products get more individualized, which make people's demand increase. Finally, the development and application of computer will be a trend occurring inevitably in the peoples' social development. Computer in the military, medical, work and life have occupied important position. Nevertheless, the great majority of students in the university use computers just for amusement, and just the minority for study and self-employment. So this negative phenomenon need to be reflected. I hope university students can use computers in perspective for benefit
