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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Opening this collection of children’s English writings is like wondering into a fragrant garden of their minds. You may find the words simple and the grammar rudimentary, but the truly moving thing about these short compositions is the innocent spirit the children put in,which ,always becomes more precious for us as years passing by. The world is such a wonder land in children’s eyes, various curious things are waiting for them to discover, to explore and to descripe. As teachers and responsible grown ups , what we need to do is to feel and appreciate their innocence.Through their own unique perspectives, these little authors captured their very own authentic life experience. By reading among the words and between the lines we can see how the children learn and grow like young eagles learn to fly.Those words records not only the trivial matters happening in daily life, but also the footmarks of the children growing and their distinctive characters. Let’s work together and provide a better place for the young eagles to learn,to grow,to fly. I hope this 《Young eagles’ world》can bestow bright eyes and flexible wings on our youthful eagles so that they can fly higher and farther in the world.

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