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高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:20浏览次数:22875
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某英文杂志新设“我的家乡”专栏向读者征文,请按下面提供的要点写一篇100个词左右的短文,介绍你的家乡过去的情况和现在的变化,向该杂志投稿。短文标题已给出。
过去:家乡小镇绿树环抱;小河清清鱼儿嬉戏;房屋简陋 街道狭窄;人们劳作生活清贫;现在:高楼大厦厂店林立;大小车辆驰骋街头;工业发展环境恶化;树木减少鱼儿消失;治理污染当务之急。
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As is vividly shown in the picture, a college student tries his best to read a lot of books in one day in order to cope with final exams.The student feels tired and depressed because he doesn't believe that he can finish it in such a short time. Nowadays, this phenomenon is prevailing in our society. Students enjoy their life during their spare time, However, when final exam comes, those students have to cram for them. There are a lot of disadvantages to this approach. For one thing, students can‘t truly acquire knowledge when they consider the exams as emergencies need to be solved. For another, Finishing all the work in one day is harmful to our health. After finishing our exams, we may feel exhausted, even fall ill. As far as I am concerned, as college students, we should preview and review knowledge during our spare time, only in this way can we truly gain knowledge. In addition, we should focus on our learning method, after all, If we chase our aims too fast, we may fail.

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