拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用,注意文中的几处句子错误。
At present, more and more people owing private car by the increasing economy .when we are go shopping seem the private car are full of road, result in the people slow creep and people think the private car are very many .But in the china everyone dream of owing private auto and become the popular trend. The private car also many of environment and social problems. Firstly ,more and more private car it emits gas insult in air and water pollute. Secondly, when private car going to road also bring the traffic problems. At the rush hour the auto remove just as creep. The last but most important ,the private car bring the energy crisis, it is common think the oil nature resource is limited. In my own eyes ,as a colleges and universities students should are reduce use private car take place of by bus .When we are trip need car may be gather reduce use private car. At last reduce use private car bring greed-environment and fresh air.