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2003年9月英语四级作文真题:同学生病

发布时间:2013-05-16 18:50浏览次数:3862
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Part Ⅴ Writing (30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:   
1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病(或受伤)的情况   
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的    
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……   
The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured)  
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Today, my best friend ,classmate kenny is not present in the class.He was attacked by some social bad guys last night and got injuryed terribly,I know it will be happened. The social group have stayed at the ground of school a while,originally nobody care of them,just a group of teen.Next some classmates start being threatened by these guys,but them still does not hurt anybody just for money,cigritte or some else you know.My sixth feeling tells me IT IS DENGEROUS.finally,it still happened and the vctiem is my best friend.I can't endure it at all and assemble some friends and relatives ,they all good guy.at the same dark night ,we wait at the street that they usually through for them with our weapons. finally,we met on the thin street,we beat togerher with roar,and we win!we sent them all to the ploice station that night,the next day,our new is through all the school ,the teachers praise us and classmates adore us,we are heroes.

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