2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of technology as well as economy,more and more people begin to shopping on the internet,especially the college students. Admittedly,shopping online,have brought convenience to us.Not only don' t have to worry about the weather,but also needn't crowded bus.What's more,it's convenient for you in are cheaper price to choose and contrast what you want to buy. As is known to us all,every coin has two sides.Online shopping we only look the products' feather,are often puzzled by the appearance.If products have quality problem or you are dissatisfied with what you buy,it will be very hard to demand a refund. In my opinion,when shopping on line,we must be cautious and try to select more reliable websites.