2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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What the most attractive thing in school is creating a Green Campus , and it is very important for us to know what is truly "creating a Green Campus".Of course , green environment is the key part for creating a Green Campus but it also contains many other sides,such as awareness of protecting environment , decreasing the application amount of disposable goods , In order to achieve this goal , not only should the school pay a attention to clean our school , but we should shoulder our responsibility to achieve this target . primarily , we should