英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 留学> 雅思> 真题> 2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:58浏览次数:7189
要求:

题目要求:

Today,the quality of life in large cities is decreasing . What are the causes and solutions?

题目讲解:

报告类题目,难度不大,思路要点在于解决方法与原因分析的对应性。

第一段:开头

第二段:原因——环境污染,健康问题,工作压力

第三段:解决——绿色科技+绿化,健康意识+运动设施,学会自我减压

第四段:结尾

用户的作文(系统评分1.0分
评语:

用户练习作文:

In the currently developed society, it is undeniable that the city plays a prominet role in the life of people. Meanwhile, the quality of urban life have been declining dramatically over the past decades. This phenomenon evoke a heated discussion about why it is occering and what solutions can been gained to solve it. So my essay will analysize and give some ways to deal with it. It is very obvious that some factors such as environment and society affacet greatly quality of people's living. More specifically, severe pollution is posing a threat on health of people due to massive carbon dioxide emission and unlimited usage of natural resources. More and more people catch various fatal desease depite the fact that modern medichine has made unpredental progresses. Moreover, people are infront with more presure in term of seriour competition in their workforce, which could lead to some phycological problems. The decrease of working effeciency has a harmful influence on people 's qualif of life. However, we have to take some measures to address these issues around the modern people. First of all, the local governmant should make strict rules and regulations to protect our environment so that people could have a heathy surroundings to live in. In addition, man and woman should participate more sport activities in order to keep them fit and in shape of body. It is a easy chanllenge for people who are very energitic and vigorous, atheletic. At the same time people make full use of casual time to enjoin their party and holiday, which could reduce pressures and become more emmotional. To summarize, the quality crisis of city life result from environmental and social reasons. Only do people take advantage of some scientic and reasonable method to overcome their matters so that they could have a more beautiful and harmonious future.

会员评论0个评论)
tolinqiming
金币:14

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:93.0wyw3021

人气:213发布:2013-08-09

得分:92.0吖我的国王

人气:85发布:2014-06-30

得分:92.0王者之

人气:85发布:2016-10-06

得分:90.0jkchan000

人气:67发布:2016-04-20

得分:89.5zhanggli2010

人气:54发布:2016-01-14