2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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What the most attractive thing in school is creating a Green Campus,and it is very important for us to know what is truly"creating a Green Campus". Of course , green environment is the key part for creating a Green Campus but it also contains many other sides,such as awareness of protecting the environment,decreasing the application amount of disposable goods,In order to achieve this goal,not only should the school pays attention to clean our school,but we should shoulder our responsibility to achieve this target.primarily,we should