题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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nowadays,we keep less and less touch with each other like your classmate , friends ,especially even your families.This issue often has been a cause of the problem between interpersonal emotion that losing faith from us and others .in the importance of on maintaining trust ,different one has different views about it ,the following has listed this . some people think that we must give our most faith to our friends even we just communicate with them for once a month or even a year ,but undoubtedly ,it can.t be a situation from your relation which be worse than it was before ,for another speaking ,it should be ourselves psychology effective which impact us indeed .and there some other persons think that the issue must be worse while we continue to be more cool toward it .when we lost the situation of our dear or other imitate partner ,it exactly means that it must be some crack existed among you ,the misleading of your expression would be more vacant until you deal with it .