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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:70947
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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Welcome to the Yellow Mountain Anhui,my hometown,it's a beautiful city.There are many places of interest deserve to visit.I'm grateful that I can grow up in such an interesting place so that I am willing to introduce the city to you .And if you come here,I will take you to my favourite place called the Yellow Moutain. the Yellow Moutain attracts many visitors all around the world every year.The place is famous because of its trees,rocks and cloud.Let me show you detail about the special advantages of the Yellow Moutain one by one. Frist,the trees stand in a diferent shape that not like the normal trees,people find it just like a people welcome them so they named it "theYingKe tree".In some people's thought,this kind of trees live in a hard place like the edge of big rocks show their strong optimism towards life. Second come to the rocks.They are interesting and can wake up your imagination.You will be surprised about the magical power of nature.You can find a new world ,as long as you release your imagination. Last but not least, many cloud suround the Yellow Mountain makes it looks like a fairyland.the cloud sea can hardly be seen in other places so that you can't miss it. In all,welcome to my city and welcome to the Yellow Mountain,you won't regret your decision if you come here!

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