作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;能够简单运用一些从句;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
How should parents help children to be independent? Nowadays many parents help children do everything .they don't like them to choose what they want,just give them something that they think is good for them.so kids depend their parents much,if they don't have them,they can not alive. Lots parents have fond this phenomenon,so they want their kids can independent.but what should they do? First,they should make children washing, learning,having meal so on by themself.Second,they should give much place to them,make them do something they like,and let them to resove theirs problem such as friendship.Third,parents should belive in them,they can do well.