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雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:12浏览次数:1952
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雅思写作主题:城市交通问题,字数在300字以内。
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In the current society, a large number of people comming from rural region have been moved to large city in order to look for carrier employment and better life as economy develops greatly fast. Meanwhile, seriously baneful transportation issus as well as polution is becoming heatedly discussed among the general people. My essay aims to investigate this issue and give my reconmmendation. Granted, urban trasportation has been a headache for every people in the modern age around the world. In this case, people spend more time on work traveling everyday when porpulaiton in the city are booming becasue of its convenient educaiton and health care. so that the pulic have to bear costly living burden. Further, this phenomenon attributes to immense healthy crisis for modern mankind. loads of people got different type of diseases such as lung cancer and brain choke in terms of the incredible environmental pollution. How to solve communication problems has been a pripority issue for a lot of country governments. To begin with, government should fullfil this responsiblity. More specificly, government could allocate more budget on public transportation by setting up more metros and light trails so as to promote more people to quite using private vehicle, which could efficiently reduce the traffic congestion. In addition, government need to make more useful policies to promote the rural development so that local people could find better job and do not need to migrant to metropolis for idead life. Also, the general people have to change their awarness to show off for the purpose of pretecting our environment. To summarize, trasportation problems indeed has became a baneful crisis all over the world. As a result, there is a joint force between government and citizens to overcome this problem through establishment of new public trasporation means and improvement of poeple's awareness for our beatiful future.

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