2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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nowadays，some people think that there is no use to receive education ,and it is a better choice to enter the work world earlier.in my point of view ,that is totally wrong.better education may not absolutely means better life ,higher salaries,but by and large ,it c according to Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey,the higher education people receive ,th