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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题:Watching TV

发布时间:2013-08-01 17:10浏览次数:1253
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【题目要求

Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.

【写作分析

第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾

第二段:看电视太多的消极面

1对身体健康不利

2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流

3 对智力发展不利

4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子

第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展

1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣

2 丰富课余生活

3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动

第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。

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In the current society, watching television has been become the very important and widespread activity among the teenagers. Meanwhile, whether television is beneficial to children or not cause a heated discussion in the society. Some people propose that watching television is a positive activity to youths while some claim children could be seriously addictive to TV. As a matter of fact, I will analyze this phenomenon and give my recommendation in my essay. To begin, television indeed has many drawbacks for young people because of its intrinsic features. More specifically, children tend to be obesite due to the long time sendentary in front of TV, which could be a negative influence on children's health. Also, the relationship between youths and their parents is likely to be alienated despite the shortage of communication and interaction among them. Last and not least, some contents on TV such as violence and drug may let children become a ciminal in the future due to their weak self-discipline and manage. Nonetheless, Watching TV may play a positive role in the children's life. First of all, young people could broaden their outlook and grab more knowledge from television, which is an excellent method to help them make success when they are in adulthood in the long run. In addition, enjoining some interesing programmes on TV coule enrich young people's extra-school life so that they get relaxed and recharged in term of boring studying in school. To summarize, watching television obviously seems to be a double thorward . we should make best use of advantages of television by choosing suitable programmes and appreciating them with children, which will promote healthy and harmonious development of children in the future.

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