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2011年7月16日雅思大作文真题:the Development in Technology

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In modern society, advanced science and technology have made great changes to our life, but we still value the artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tells us about life that the science technology can not.

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In the current society, the high technology is immensely affacting our life since the advent of information era. However, some arts are still important part of our life such as music, painting and literature which provide great valuable contributions to general people. Therefore, I will analyse the benefits came from arts and give my recommendations in the essay. To begin with, art plays an indispendable role in people's mental world. More specifically, the art may spark the curiosity and interest in the people and facilitate their imagination and creativity so that more and more unique discoveries are found and a lot of new products are manufactured to enrich modern life. Further, individuals need to think about the meaning of life and explore their magic spiritual world when people's material demand are met due to the high efficiency and low cost new technology brings about. so these arts are greatly suitable tools for people to develop their spirits. In addition, the development of art industry positively promotes the economic development in many western countries. A great number of tourists are attracted to visit well-known cities so it promotes local flourish of tourism and produces more employment opportunities due to numerous museums , theaters and galleries built by local governments. Unlike many high technology industries, art could improve furtherly awareness of environmental pretection of people becuse it never gives rise to any pollution. To summarize, my conclusion is that the art and artists bring more benefits to people in terms of its advantages in mental world and economy and environment, which could promote the comprehensive progresses of human being and society in the long term.

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