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2012年8月9日雅思大作文真题:the Social Interaction

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Mobile (cell) phones and the Internet play an important role in the way in which people relate to one another socially. Is this a positive or negative development? What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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第一段:介绍背景,电讯技术取代了面对面的交流方式

第二段:人们的联系增加;独立性增加

第三段:关系的质量下降;亲情交流被手机干扰太多

第四段:科技的好坏取决于我们如何用它

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In the current society, the telecommunication techenology is immensely influence the life way of people ,which the tradditional face to fact communication has been replaced by mobile phone and internet. As a result, its social role and effect on people has causde a heated discussion about whether it is a boon or bane. From my point of view, there are some positive reasons to our development which I will analyze in my essay. To begin with, mobile phones has obviously bring about many benefits to human being in terms of its especial features. More specifically, there is no dening fact individuals are likely to comtact their family and friend due to convienence and low cost of mobile technology, which can facilitate any people in the one side of the world to know emergency of their parents on the other side of world and give them helps on time. Further, people could strenthen their independences so as to improve efficience and become more productive without seeing customers. thereby, employees could finish more projects so that the employers could get more profits at the same time. Nonetheless, we can not overlook the drawbacks of mobile communication. In this case, the quality of relationship between people could descend because of being lack of real communication, which the isolation and alienation could happen so that it contributes to social unharmoney. A pretty prevellence example we can look at in the society is that people are addictive to mobile phone which result in weak family bonds and some phychological problems occur from time to time. some disadvantages of telecommunication is throwing the serious threat on the family cohesion. To summarize, the mobile phone is undoubtedly a double edged sword for mankind. Whether telecommunication may be more beneficial to people or not fully depends on how to use it. Only do we take full advantage of mobile cell, we can maximize its merits in order to promote healthy and vivid development of our society in the future.

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