2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Business is booming,and consumption is larger and larger.How do the businessmen develop their goods to get the largest profits?Yes,packaging.There is no doubt beautiful package attracts more people,but what we want to buy is goods,is not the package,so excessive packaging is kind of inpropriate.And there is lots of goods whose price is up to high,so ,that's that.