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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36963
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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I have a good friend. He name is Tim. He is a cute and friendly boy with curly bland hair. As a hamesome boy, he help other one as him could do. What's more, Tim go to school with me everyday, no wheater what the weather is. Furthemore, he would doworkjob at home because of he want to help his mother. In all, Tim is a good friend in my life, and help me a lot.

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