2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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The life quality in large cities is decreasing in recent years. It caused by several elements. One is cost increased a lot, but the salary or welfare increased very less. For example, China GDP increase close to 8% every year, the vegetable price, food price were increased almost double. But normally the salary increase 4% is the very good company. That means, the incoming lower than outcoming. Another one is world economic declined from 2008 to today, many companies bankrupted and worker unemployeed. People have not money to buy. It caused the live quality decrease. Of course, there are many other reasons, for example, air and food are polluted seriously. Now we are afraid to eat anything. All food can be found the chemical element. People's body quality lower and lower. Watering the vegetal by polluted water, seafood has heavy metal, etc. We are facing a very bad food chain and do not know what we can eat. For those cases, we can't change it in one day, we should pay attention to it from daily actions. i.e. we can do more exercise to improve our body quality to prevent disease. We also should to protect our enviroment, include water and air, it helps us get better quality life.