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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951[网页划词已开启]
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用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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I have a good friend,her name is Tang Hai Mei.She is 24-years-old now.She is a beauty and nice girl but still is single,she said that is because she is too nice.I very love her,I will enjoy my everything with her,such as my emotion.We sometimes will greet each other in morning,saying lover words. She works as a salesman in Dongguan,she very very love her work and often stay out for her work.She said this work can make her keep the sense of success.Of couse,we all both support her to do it! She likes singing,however,her voice is very greatful!If you also like singing,maybe you can make a good friend with her! Yeah,Tang Hai Mei is my good friend.We will get along well forever ever!

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