2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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as we all know,there is a high pays for that people who has a high degree of education.from the Bureau of labor statistics,Current Population Survey.we can see all kinds of the people's ability about make money . For example,these people who had less than high school diploma their earning are very low and their unempoyment rate are high.On the contray,the people who has high degree earnings so much and the unemployment rate on the bottom.such as Doctoral degree have earnings 1,551dollars on weekly in 2011,the next is Professional degree is 1,665 and the unemployment rate so low, For our life in the future is more and more better, we should make us get high degree .If so, when we in the school we must try our best to learn new knowledges .