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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:57浏览次数:3291
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Perseverance makes people stronger.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮。你持有什么观点?给出具体原因和例子。

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it's been truly accepted by majority of people that perseverance in one of the most instrumental factor that leads to the great success, while another minority of people, holding a sort of pessimistic point that perseverance may fall victim to the frustration and desperation. just as the saying goes:every coins has two sides. scientifically and rationally persevering in personal career, health maintenance and lifetime goal enables you to be stronger and more successful , on the contrary, emotional and blind persistence in impossible things is nothing less than a black hole which may cost all your life day by day. under right guidance and the verified rules, scientist fallows the scientific research sustainably to explore the unknown field and make benefits for human beings. perseverance give birth to the stronger intelligence and confidence in future; keeping a healthier diet and scheduled routine training, our athletes continuously break the human limitations:up to the summit of Everest,down to the deepest sea. without perseverance, nothing can be achieved. however, there is no denying truth that the world is not good enough because of the lasting and endless perseverance of those resultless pursuit. some people become perseverant in maximumly acquiring the supreme power, by all means illegally and abnormally and finally lost everything and even fall to a prisoner; some people try to embed their extreme thoughts into all the people in the world as their ultimate goal, only to cause more violence and make the world living in conflicts and wars.

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