文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨。
These days, it is quite common to see many companies have excessive packaging in their goods. Finally, some people will find their bought was not their wanted. In the past decade, this phenomenon has surfaced to catch more and more people's attention. I think there are two necessaries factors.Firstly,good packaging will let people believe it is quality, therefore they are more willing to pay. Secondly, if something look good will get higher prices. From my view of point, I suggest that we should be carefully when we shopping.Don't confuse by attractive packaging. At the same time, government should be stronger check to prevent goods which have excessive packaging into the markets.To resist on excessive packaging, we must be reasonable and continuous.