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When it comes to sleep, people’s opinions vary. Some people think that we should sleep as much as possible to keep our mind conscious. Some people think that we shouldn’t sleep too much because long time sleep makes people sleepy. In my opinion, appropriate sleep can not only refresh our mind but also keep us energetic