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雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

发布时间:2013-05-15 12:07浏览次数:10545
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Nowadays it is more convenient and easier for people to travel to other countries, is it development a positive or negative effect?

雅思写作主题:出国旅游的利弊,字数在300字以内。

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As a huge number of people choose to travel abroad, it is widely believed that it will boost the employee to the forigne country. Moreover, as the more tourists come and how much they spend will benefit the coutries that will also siginificantly enhancecd the people's life quaility. However, it is not only positive effects but as well as negatives effects. Majorty tourists trought the rubbish and as the result it will lead the environment pollution, moreover it will also destroy the native animals and that will cause the risk for the disctincitve animals.

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