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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9557
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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Now shopping online is a fasionable way to buy anything . On the one hand, shopping online is very convenient ,we just have to open the app then we can search every things we need from all over the world .This can save our time. Shopping online can also save our money ,because the things which sale online will be cheaper than the same sale in shops. On the other hand, shopping online has some limited ,It's save money but at the same time it let people don't go out to sport,and it's not benifit for people's health. Tough sopping online is cheap but some time we will find the things sale online will have a poor quality or maybe it will be broken on the delivery,and some shop owner will not give you a good solution , and you should pay for it's wrong. To sum up in conclussion,I think shopping online is benifit for us ,but we shouldn't depend on it .We should go shopping on shop ,and the goverment can enact some law to make shpping online more safe for people.

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