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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? Nowadays,most of the family have unique child.Parents are very fond of their child.It caused that,at present,many parents do everything for their children. To be children independent,parents should learn to trust children who can do themselves things well.Don't do everything for children.Because that it is bad for you child.However,some parents are worried about their children would be hurt.Let's their children never do things.Lead to their children are weak at hands-on ability.Who grow as birds in the cage.They don't communicate with other children and lack of social experience. In my opinion,parents shouldn't do everything for their children.Learn to respect and trust children.Let children try they best to do what want to.
