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Hi, Mr. George. long time no see. I have received your letter. First, Welcome you to our household hotel in sometime. I will introduce something about the hotel. The single room is 30 yuan and double room is 20 yuan everyday. There is 20 yuan about food everybody and everyday. You can choose the menu and have lunch with the household, or have lunch by yourself. You can know about china more and more.