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2010年专四作文真题:学生雇佣清洁工

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:48浏览次数:5301
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题目 Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
说明 It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has lead to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners. Should College Student Hire Cleaners?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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Recently , a new that six students hire a cleaner to do cleaning work has arouse heated debate . It's undeniable that everyone likes living in a comfotable and tidy environment. Howerer , in my opinion, I don't side with this kind of behavior. First of all , college students should develop the ability of self-doing. For example , students can distribute the cleaning work and do it by turns. After all, dorms is not a quite big space ,and it just takes a few minutes to finish the sweeping work. Besides, for students, it will save money if they clean the room by themselves. As a matter of fact , hiring cleaner is not advisable at college becauses this kind of behavior may be luxurious, and it is disobey the rule that we advoate penny-pinching. Most importantly, it's easy to hire others to help you clean the room, likewises, it's easy to develop a bad habit of lazy All in all, students should not hire cleaner no matter how rich he or she is . What counts on is that they should do the students should do .

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